Labor journal week 12

1. This week, I believe my work labor was average, could of been better if I spent more time working and revising my essay than I actually did. But I did do a lot of reading from my book club book which is great, it's a great book for sure. 
2. Some takeaways about the concept of revising is that we should look at it and decide if everything belongs where it currently is or if it can be moved somewhere else where it would make more sense and more of a powerful statement. That's something I didn't know before this. However, I knew that we should spend time away from our essay and check it out in a couple of days to avoid bias and get a fresh eye.
3. HOC- 1. Thesis 2. Essay Structure 3. ? (work on this on Monday)
4. MOC- body paragraphs (work on this on Tuesday)
5. LOC- Grammar (work on this on Wednesday)